IELTS Writing Task 2: Model essayPosted: Friday, May 24, 2013
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There are more and more people migrating to big cities in search for a better life. However, others think that life in big cities is also difficult. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Recent years have witnessed a strong tendency of migration to developed cities. Although people living in these cities have to face certain difficulties, life in big cities still offers several advantages.
Living in developed cities is detrimental in some aspects. Perhaps the most apparent disadvantage lies in a decreased quality of life among people residing in these cities. One reason is that large cities are densely populated, resulting in a great number of individual transporting vehicles. Gas emission, traffic noise and smell of burned fuels leads to a severely polluted living environment. Besides, many employees working in major regions suffer from work-related stress due to overwhelming workloads and a fear of losing their jobs. In the long run this may result in mental and psychological disorders, which in turn will affect their health negatively.
However, many people argue that it is beneficial to live and work in major cities. One benefit is present in more opportunities to get jobs with high salary. Since main cities play the central role in a country’s economic development, many large companies and incorporations are located here. These organizations usually offer better salary levels than those in rural areas. Moreover, life in major cities is very convenient. It is evident that various kinds of service in developed regions could satisfy almost all the needs of people. Indeed, such utilities as airports and entertainment centers common in urban areas may not be available in less developed regions.
To conclude, it is apparent that people living in big cities have to handle some difficulties. However, I personally believe these drawbacks are exceeded by the benefits that life in these cities provides.
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